Friday, December 26, 2008

It's time to break the silence...

.

.

Enough...

How long can you lie,
How long can you die,
How long can you wish to stay
And yet say goodbye.

How long can you bleed,
How long can you plead,
How long can you give away
When it's all that you need.

How long can you fear,
How long can you bear,
How long can you loose it all
Yet smile without a tear.

How long can you stand
The agony of disgrace.
How long can you endure
The defeat in embrace.

How long can you conceal
What you felt all this long.
How long can you ignore
Your heart's wishful song.

Enough...

It's time to break the silence,
It's time to speak the words,
It's time to tell the sky,
The sun, the clouds, the birds.

It's time to give the answers,
To end the gloomy nights.
It's time to speak the truth,
It's time to claim the rights.

It's time to hope, it's time to dream,
It's time to wish, it's time to scream.
To speak your heart, word by word,
It's time to ask from the nasty world...
my fair share of happiness...
my fair share of happiness...



7 comments:

Tanya said...

I wish i could write exactly the way u've written these lines and tell u how b'ful it is...

Always keep writing!!

S J Mayank Srivastav said...

the use of word "fair" is pretty good

Divya said...

That's a lot of questions! Now that's what you call a probing poem! :P

I liked your "silence" wala poem better. that one was more intensive!(and quotable!! :P ) Heyy I posted comments on that 1 2.. :))

But anyways, a nice effort. Keep it up always. kavi-shree chhavi-jee! :P

Anonymous said...

Its really very nice. I felt so motivated and inspired after reading this poem.
I think every one should read this poem wheneve hez feeling down.
Keep it up chhavi
U r getting better poem by poem :)

Anonymous said...

gud yaar....very sensitive n burning issue n u dealt it wid it FAIRly :)....a poet in makng

ashkd said...

Chhavi.. my theory of "poetry" is that it should be felt differently for different people.. it should have my context as well.. but words are more important for the reader than the reading of my mind.. :-) 2nd reason, surely everything is for a purpose but i want to have your purpose to read first then my purpose to let you read me later..

what are you doing these days??

as Divya has written, i liked your last poem.. somehow that gave a feeling of freeflow.. this gives a feeling of bounded structured poetry.. break the boundaries... :-)

Sugandha Gupta said...

hey such a thoughtful person u r
keep blogging :)
nice post